Goal: walkthrough of presentations for FDR SysEng breakout to make sure we cover the right material and that there is a consistency between the presentations.
FDR slides:
Overall comments:
FDR Presentations:
Needs a title
Start with what are we using simulations for in the project
Overview of the tools available
Describe the deliverables and when they will be delivered
Note when each system was reviewed
Motivate the usage at the beginning with project needs
Include a description of dust model and tie to LSST
Plots of distributions
Emphasis is risk reduction so this is about validation of algorithms
Drop affiliation from intro slide
Dont separate out student contributors
Slides 5-7 are busy
Increase the number of slides if the slide gets busy and hard to follow (eg slide 5)
Try to convey flow of information through the system in the slide
Put validation after slide with all of the psfs
Have atmosphere validation as a backup
Use the official template and make it shorter (20mins with questions)
Describe the goals of opsim (maximize science programs simultaneously, develop a validated scheduler)
Start with a lay-man's description of how opsim works (e.g. telescope parameters, weather, science cadences) and its output
Less of the software objects and details and more use cases and how it ties to project needs
Describe universal cadence and deep fields to show you can to cadence trade studies
Simplify SSTAR to just include figures and results
Describe number of runs done with opsim and its successes
Describe missing functionality in terms of a roadmap for development and delivery